You have used some great descriptive words that make me feel like I am eating a watermelon when I read your poem! That is the exact purpose of poetic writing, well done!
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You have used some great descriptive words that make me feel like I am eating a watermelon when I read your poem! That is the exact purpose of poetic writing, well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you Mrs Darlington for checking out my work and commenting on it. I'm glad you like it.
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